Grah...I so suck at life right now. I'm sorry. I totally got this when you sent it the second time, but I'm in the middle of a big move right now and my brain is apparently on the blitz. I know I meant to comment when I first got it ;__;

My airheadedness aside, OMG THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCH!!!! IT'S TOTALLY AWESOME! And who cares if it's not colored, the lines are AMAZING. Sora's expression is just priceless, as well as Riku's in the BG. Is that drool I see on you Mr. Riku XD

And the little Shadow in there too, SO CUTE X3 I almost wish there were Heartless in this story so that I could write that in...hmm...unless they are some kind of a popular toy brand? YOU SOULDN'T GIVE ME CRAZY IDEAS DX

You did such a good job with the musculature too. It's awesome how you captured the difference in their body types without making Riku all SUPER-RIPPED, and how lanky Sora is. I also LOVE the awesome speed lines on Sora's arm. Looks like he's preparing to make a shot, yes?

Anyway, I just want to say thank you again SO much. I don't have words to properly express the appreciation I feel. I mean, it's just amazing to me that people like this story enough to spend additional time creating art of the characters. It gives me all kinds of warm fuzzies :3

Again, I'm sorry I'm such a tool. This deserved immediate attention and I failed so hard at giving it its proper due. I'm shocked no one else has poked at it because it really is adorable. I shall be posting a link on my profile page and announcing your awesomeness in my journal. Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you

oh...and thank you

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haha thanks, really glad you liked it!
and dont feel bad, I just made this accout so I doubt anyone is really take
immediate notice, and thanks for compliments! Means a lot from another artist!
I actually messed up on riku thoughh...looks a bit too bulgey >_< I got some coloring supplies
but I was afraid to ruin it;But thanks anyways! And don't worry about it^^
'M just glad it didn't insult you or anything

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Really fabulous, hun! And welcome to dA ^__^ This is so awesomely done! Sora and Riku's expression are fantastic - (especially loving Riku, for some reason, kind of want him to swoop in and grab Sora and kiss the oxygen out of him :3) The perspective with Sora's arm is really well done AND THE HEARTLESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So cute

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Haha, aw thanks! xD glad you liked it, yes Riku is definately thinking dirty thoughts.. If you looks closely, I hid sora's hand cuz I got pissed off with it but thanks! heartless was pretty random xD

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This is so awesome! I love how you drew Sora's face!!! And the heartless in the corner is just too cute ^^

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Sasunaru 4 eva
And ShikaSasu
And every other Sasuke the man whore pairing!
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